rionaleonhart: final fantasy versus xiii: a young woman at night, her back to you, the moon high above. (nor women neither)
Riona ([personal profile] rionaleonhart) wrote in [community profile] 1character 2025-08-23 09:40 am (UTC)

I was excited to see you'd posted this, and my expectation more than paid off; this is wonderful! His resignation and isolation and exhaustion come across so strongly, and you've packed so many little details into these brief snapshots. This poor kid. 'Gold' is one of my favourites; 'not that he'll stay long' is the perfect punch at the end.

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